Bonjour, Je viens de refaire la correction ,je voudrais savoir si tout est ok ou sinon me corrigé en me disant ou se trouve la faute que je puisse correctement

Bonjour,
Je viens de refaire la correction ,je voudrais savoir si tout est ok ou sinon me corrigé en me disant ou se trouve la faute que je puisse correctement corriger ce texte.
Merci à toutes les personnes qui m'aiderons.


I/ Introduction
The picture is a cartoon. Whe don't know when it was published. It is probably appared in a magazine. We don't have information abouti the hautor of this draw. It is about opposition between two parts of people.
First I will describe the picture, then I will try to analysis. Finally I will give my opinion.

II/ Description
We can see through picture, the first one on the left is a little birdwho holds a rope in his mouth. Below, the autor writes "early birds".
On the right, we can see an other bird : an owls. is He holds the other end of the rope in his mouth. Below, the autor writes "night owls".

The letters for the first birds and the second aren't the same.
The first one is written in tiny letters and the second one in capital letters.

III/ Analysis
The picture represents two parts of the population. The first bird represents a part who lives on the day. The owls represents people who lives a part of the night. The rope shows the link which between them.

IV/ Give his opinion
The society is rather done for these persons who live nowadays.