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Bonjour, j’ai un DM en Anglais (mes vacances de Noël à raconter). Pouvez vous vérifier si tout est bon (les consignes en photo).
Merci en avance (:
(Ps. Je suis une fille)

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« During my holidays I went to Poland and I saw my family.
For Christmas i got a money and I ate various Polish dishes from the table (there were twenty of them)
For New Year’s Eve I went to a
concert of a very famous Polish singer, with my Cousine.
With my friends, we went shopping to the mall and we went to the cinema, to see frozen 2.
Towards the end of the holidays i went to my best friend's pajama party, we ate crisps, popcorn and various Polish snacks, and we watched Polish horrors.
During my stay in Poland I met a friend from England whom I had not seen for 4 years. »
Bonjour, j’ai un DM en Anglais (mes vacances de Noël à raconter). Pouvez vous vérifier si tout est bon (les consignes en photo). Merci en avance (: (Ps. Je suis

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  • Presque parfait juste quelques petites fautes :

    1) I got money ,pas "I got a money"

    2) cousin ,pas "Cousine"

    3) pas une erreur d'anglais mais évite de mettre "and" deux fois dans la même phrase

    4) I had not seen in four years, pas "for 4 years"

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